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« Thread Started on May 13, 2008, 11:20am » | ![[Quote]](http://s4.images.proboards.com/buttons/quote.gif) |
Glory thundered into the land his flints beating down hard onto the ground,spraying up mud and dirt behing him. He looked around him and saw a beautiful terra. There was no smell of other equines so he assumed he was alone.
The weather was warm and pleasant perfect spring weather. There were no flies around and the birds sung happily around him. The grass around him was bright green and looked sweet.
He decided to claim this land. He reared up balancing on his hind flints and screamed I Glory claim this land as loud as his lungs would allow him. He thudded back down onto all four flints and took a nibble of the sweet grass.
I think i deserve this terra because no-one else has claimed it and I will stay as active as I can and I will try and improve my RPing
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« Reply #1 on May 15, 2008, 5:49pm » | |
A voice came down from the clouds like a heavy bomb, it laughed at Glory's attempt to claim the land of Easter Highlands. Did he really think that he diserved this land? Come on this is a total joke. worthy? the voice chuckled, The attempt was pathetic, anyone could fight for this land, and beat him in a land slide. It was obvious that he had never done this before, and probably would never do it again. why are you worthy? tell me, and you might be granted this land. Just because he was the only one there did not mean he was just granted the land. He was going to have to work much harder. The sky grew dark, and the trees started to whistle, why was he even trying? maybe he would be better if he had more strength but right now he had no chance of getting the position of lead stallion.
OOC: please post why glory is worthy of this land, not you.. also please try and go into more detail in your posts the rule is around 400 words, and yours is only about 250. I will grant you this land.. i would just like this sight to be an advanced role play game, and it might be hard, i even have to work to get my posts that long. It is ok if not every post is 400 words long, but i would like all beginning posts to be this long. What helps me is to go into deep deep detail. I am not trying to be mean, it is just the way i would like this site to represented. If you would like me to i will pm you an example post of what i would like the posts in claiming and other boards to look like. I have no problem with helping you.. that is what an admin is for.. 
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« Reply #2 on May 16, 2008, 10:04am » | |
Please can you post or send me an example I find these things .... hard to grasp if you know waht i mean.
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« Reply #3 on May 16, 2008, 3:17pm » | |
i know exactly what you mean! lol... um i can not do it right now but i will when i get back on later
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« Reply #4 on May 18, 2008, 5:52am » | |
He heard a voice, a powerful voice that seemed to come from the sky above him. I beleive I am worhy because I am a strong stag with more power that meets the eye he thought carefully about what he said, for he wanted this land for his own. I also care for those I love deeply and will protect them and this land against anything that tries to hurt them or steal It. The sky quickly darkend around him. He gazed up at the sky the black clouds had appeared from no-where. The Wind whistled through the trees ruffling his tassles. This also caused his banner to fly ou behind him. The wind picked up strengh but he stood strong staying in the same place. The wind was the strongest he had ever seen it before now. He dug his flints into the earth underneath him and dropped his head slightly. Leaves were flying everywhere now it was amazing the wind hadn't up heavier things than leaves. He looked up to see a flash of lightning quickly followed by a loud clap of thunder. The rain suddenly started, heavy, huge drops of thrashing rain This isn't natural he thought to himself. what is this he shouted up Is it a test. if it was a test it was quite a pressing one, like no other challenge he had faced before.
He dropped his head for the rain was hitting his sensitive spots and hurting them. He dug his flints into the ground more as the wind once again picked up even stronger than before. He slipped slightly as the ground beneath him became boggy and wet. He dug his flints in even more and he stood fast awaiting the answer of the voice from above.
I tried Is that ok??
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« Reply #5 on May 19, 2008, 8:25am » | |
Well he seemed like the type of stallion that would work hard for what he wanted. Maybe he was worthy..
sry can't really post right now... lol
that was a good post... the line that says the stuff about the wind whistling was really good.
you have the land! good work.
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« Reply #6 on May 19, 2008, 9:59am » | |
s'ok. Yay thanks.
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